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Diary of a dead officer :being the posthumous papers of Arthur Graeme West
with an introduction by Nigel Jones
published by Greenhill Books, May 2007
ISBN 1853677299
cover price - £19.99
hardback, 192pp

reviewed by owner of The Long, Long Trail, Chris Baker

Not sure about this one. I am afraid that I took an almost instant dislike to the man, Arthur Graeme West. His opening lines in his diary, written soon after enlisting into the ranks of the Public Schools Battalion in March 1915, talk about how his sensibilities were offended by being there. How his nose and ears were assailed by what I can only imagine to be a group of non-pubic schoolboys. He came across to me as a prig before the end of the first page and subsequent reading did not greatly improve my endearment to him.

 

The first four sections of the book are composed of extracts from Arthur's diaries and letters. The first takes us through his training, his move to France in November 1915 and early times in the trenches. Next we are back in England, undergoing the tedium and "bull" of training for a commission. The third is a deep reflection: he is challenging the war, himself, the army. Finally we are out in France again, with Arthur now an officer of the 6th Ox & Bucks.

 

His writing is powerful and emotional, full of imagery and none more so than when he is undergoing what is clearly inner torment. But he seems to take no solace from the friendship of pals, pride in his unit or even the cynicism about war that many men used as the liferaft they needed to keep themselves afloat. His is a very inward-looking, isolated view.

 

The final section of the book is a collection of poetry. One piece in particular, "The night patrol", is particularly admirable and I say that as someone who does not enjoy war poetry.

 

Nigel Jones, in his introduction, calls Arthur Graeme West an "outstanding witness of the war". I am not sure. There are passages that are vivid, certainly, but I found the work introspective and not particularly insightful.

 

One other gripe: I presume it was the author rather than publishers who chose to call his friends and places A---, B--- and C--- . The book could perhaps have benefited from some work to determine who these individuals and places were.

 

One thing I can not fault is Greenhill Books production quality; it is excellent.


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